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Hi Ronny,
Well done for attempting the writing or a sonnet. Your rhyming changes after the first 4 lines. you start with the rhyme sequence being abab, but change to aabb. This makes it a little difficult to read. The iambic pentameter is out of sync in some lines. It was however a great idea to attempt a sonnet of Shakespeare using Richard III as a text base.
Blessings
Dave
Dave Z'Art 