Peer Review Alex

https://s00149741.wordpress.com/2016/08/28/blog-post-1-creative/

Great poem Alex. Could you fix the typo that says “sweat” instead of sweet. The anger we feel at our pets is only because they will not conform to our will. though when we sometimes rebel against authority we ask it to be applauded. I guess it depends on perspective. See through your puppy’s eye. he finally is allowed to run free, to experience life to the full and you are trying to stifle his freedom.
Well done.

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